This is Ravenclan's camp!It borders a calm stream,giving the cats a close source of water.The camp is protected by thick bramble bushes, the only way in is throught the hidden bramble tunnel entrence.The medecine cat's den is in some bushes near the water.Beside it is the elders den,in some bushes beside it.Caught imbetween two trees,is a fallen log that make up the warriors den.The nursery is an abandoned fox den,with a soft earth floor.It's imbetween the water's edge and the warriors den.The apprentice's den is a couple of fallen trees pushed against a thicker tree.It's surrounded by bushes that protect it.Lastly the leader's den is a stone hanging over an old rabbits den.Tall grass blocks most of the entrence making it very dark inside.Hollystar calls meetings from the Speaking stone,the stone hanging over her den.The freshkill pile is usualy near the center of camp.Kits love to play in shallow pools beside the river.
The deputy dives into the camp, carring a squirrel on his back. He dropped the mouse dangling from his mouth onto the ground and layed down, wiggling the squirrle off. He purred and smiled pleased with him self. FangHeart grasped the squirle and nudged it against the mouse, then let out a murrow of laughter, sauntering off to the creek. He stood over the edge and watched slowly, keeping his shadow behind him. he then slashed at the water and dived at a glittering mass on the shore. he nipped it and then set it to the side, watching the water intently. His claws flashed menacingly as they grabbed yet another fish from the creek. Fangheart lept on the fish and nipped its skull, killing it. He nudged both fish to the squirrel and mouse, satisfied now with his kill. He flooped down in a patch of light and dozed off, a soft purr like a kits, emitting from him.
ReplyDeleteHollystar gazed around smiling at Ravenclan's newest warrior,Mistmoon.She hoped that the young she-cat would be only the first of many cats to join them.
ReplyDeleteShadowfoot paded over to the freshkill pile and picked up a fish.She paded back over to a some shade and lay down to begin eating her meal.
Mistymoon hopped out of her nest and stretched. She walked out of her den and over to Fangheart. "Wow!" she exclaimed. "That's a lot of prey!" she added. "Thanks." he meowed. "You can take one." he added. "Ok." she replied.
ReplyDeleteMistymoon picked a fish from the pile. She loved the taste of fish. She started munching on it. After she was done, she walked over to the forest. "I might as well do a border patrol." she meowed to herself and sighed. She leaped into the forest.
(Mintleaf speaking)
ReplyDeleteI looked around the camp. Not bad. Lots of prey and herbs could grow around here.
"Leafwhisper! Your kits are going to be due in the next few days!" I said.
"Cool! My first litter!" Leafwhisper said.
"Yes! I know how you feel!" I said to her.
"Hollystar." I said. "Do you think it's possible for me to go and find some herbs?"
"Yes. Take Mistymoon with you though." Hollystar said.
"Sure!" I said to her and dashed away.
Hollystar watched them go smiling.I'm glad we have such a good medecine cat!She thought,her eyes glowing proudly.
ReplyDeleteFangheart waves his tail to hollystar and then tackles her, pawing at her ears. "Got you! Ha you cant best the power of the deputy." He gets off and purrs playfully. "so how have you been this morning sister?" Fangheart look around at the cats around him and dips his head sheepishly. "Well..... Ill be over there. " Fangheart runs off and up in a tree, his fluffy tail hanging down from the brach-
ReplyDelete(to my fellow clan mates) I am not serrious cat. I love to play around like kits and love kits. I am serrious in battles and when it comes to be. I am mousebrained , yes. But we all are in our own ways.
DeleteLiving in expectation,
FangHeart.
Hollystar get back up and shakes dust from her pelt.She sits down and smiling shakes her head fondly tawards her brother.She wraps her tail around her paws,as her eyes glow with warmth.
ReplyDeletefangheart looks down at the clan cats and asks leafwhisper something. "Umm, How are you. I ish Fangheart, Deputy of the clan. Oh wow!" he jumps out of the tree and purrs as he see's she is expecting. "YAY!!! Kits to play with!! I love kits. Could i name one? PWEASEE!!!" fanghearts tail waves in excitement at the prospect of new kits and a growing clan
ReplyDeleteFangheart sighs and saunters in cirles, his tail twitching to songs in his head that he had heard from birds. He purred and fell onto his side.
ReplyDeleteFangheart purrs and rolls out of his nest and bounces over mintleafs sleeping form and dances around Ivyleaf, pading out into the night and purring loudly. He pad over to the creek and slipped in silently, the oils keeping his fur dry. He dived under and cast his sences out, feeling the rush of a fin in his wishers he shot at the motion and grasped the fish. Killing it, he slipped out of the water and dropped the decent sized bass on the bank, then kicked off, swimming into the middle of the creek. He let out a murrow of laughter and dived into the deeper of part of the water. HE held his breath until his paws touched the bottom of the creek, and then he launched out of the water as silver droplets splashed on the surface as they hopped off his body. He landed and then swam to the edge of the watewr, sliding out and lapping at his tail, fluffing it out. he shook his fur and sat, licking at the water in his pelt. after Fangheart finished he went over to the leaders dfen and sat infront of it, curlling up protectively around the entrance.
ReplyDeleteHollystar watched her brother from the shadows of a bush were she had been eating a squirrel.She paded over to Fangheart and gazed at him curiously."Fangheart...What are you doing?"She asked.
ReplyDeleteHe blinked surprised and looks up at her. Fangheart purred amused with him self, tail curved around his paws. "I thought you was in your den, i was just gaurding you. Remember, When mom left us, i protected you... I think.. hehe. Well i am still your big brother. Born first."
ReplyDelete"Warrios! Gather by the prey pile for patrol duties!" Fangheart cried out as he looked at the bigg bas he had caut last night. he rolled his eyes. The twitched the white tip of his tail in impatience, waiting for the warriors to gather.
ReplyDeleteIvyWhisper, I need you on border patrol with Mistymoon and mark a border. We have yet to set one, so just find a worthy border that will alow us to have growing room. Finchflight, your with me in hunting patrol." Fangheart Walked off, purring at how nice that sounded, motioning to Finchflight to follow him. "Cant wait for apprentices, then we can have more help with herbs and food."
ReplyDeleteFangheart here. This is a random post so that all know what i expecgt to happen. Every time i give a patrol order, i expect it done within a week. reason is cause, I accept it, We all cant be on all the time.
Delete(this is DeathClaw. He is sleeping over so he can rp today)
ReplyDelete*the night is quite the air is moist from the previous night's rain and the gentle tom quitely watches over the camp the wind ruffling his fur his paws tucked neatly underneath himself his gaze softening as the stars shine brightly above him casting a entrancing shine upon his left side of his face reaveling his blue eye. As the bracken moves noisyly he turns his head exposing his green eye on the right side of his face and watches alert for an intruder and he relaxes his muscles as he sees leafwhisper return from the dirt place and he settles onto the rock for the night*
Hollystar paded out of her den,restless.She scanned the clearing over with her green gaze noting Deathclaw's familiar form.She paded over to the camp entrence,eager for a bit of night hunting.She loved the way her body blended in with the nights shadows.
ReplyDeleteFinchflight burst into the camp and bumbed into Hollystar.
ReplyDelete"Slow down Finchflight!What's happened?"She asked.He quickly exaplined everything.She noded her expression a mixed of feeling."You go ahead and get Mintleaf.I'll go join him."She mewed,already bounding out of camp and into the forest.Finchflight didn't waste any time and paded quickly over to the medecine cat's den."Mintleaf!Come quickly,Fangheart's hurt!"He mewed loudly.
Blackkit stood beside Whitekit, after noticing Flinchflight dash into the camp, worry became of her.
ReplyDelete"..We should go help." Says Blackkit, asking Whitekit to join her.
"Are you kidding?" He asks with wide eyes,
"No are you?" She rolls her eyes walking to the exit of the barrier to the camp, Whitekit stopped her in her tracks.
"We can't! We would be in so much trouble we wouldn't even be able to become apprentices! For Starclan sakes Blackkit! What's gotten into you?"
"Nothing.." She said, she was furious, and wanted too help whoever was injured.
"Can we just go already?" Asks Blackkit with a frown to her face,
"Oh, alright.." He said un-easy..
Blackkit honestly just wanted to help Mintleaf, after all she had been wanting to become a medicine cat apprentice..Longing too but nervously, not being able to admit the feeling.
They both padded out of camp, quickly though quietly.
IvyWhisker stalked up on the cats.. She pounced on them.. getting there tails.. her clawes sheated.. she plafully licked there heads.. "Where do you think your going?" she asks them cuirously...
ReplyDeleteBlackkit tried to think of a lie, until Whitekit blurted out the truth.
ReplyDelete"Blackkit want's to see what is going on with-!" Blackkit shoved her tail into his mouth cutting him off,
"With..Herbs! That is it, we just wanted too see if we could find any herbs for Mintleaf, that is all." She playfully cuffed her ear and licked her head,
Mistymoon pricked her ears. 'What's all the noise?' she thought. Wearily, she heaved herself out of her nest and walked outside. One of the warriors was there. "What's wrong?" she asked.
ReplyDelete"Fangheart is hurt." was the reply.
"Oh no!" she meowed.
IvyWhisker shook her head.. "Can i come then? it's dangerous out there.." she said to the kits.. looking at them solemnly.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit finally frowned, she wasn't going to get past this one.
ReplyDelete"I wanted to go see what was wrong with Finchflight, she came in in such a hurry ad then right back out along with the medicine cat." She said nervously, Whitekit looking proud of his sister,
Deathclaw, ran into the other warriors, dragging Fanghearts limp body. He kept dragging past them, toward the medicine den, the bleeding had slowed, a slimmer of blood trailing the near dead tom. Deathclaw laid Fangheart in a den and licked at his wound in the chest, cleaning it. "Wheres the medicine cat!?" deathclaw asked, his eyes sharpened with worry. fanghearts breathing was ragged and he opend his eye, glancing around. "Oh.. Help.. I... H..urt."
ReplyDeleteBlackkit finally realized what she would have , to do.
ReplyDeleteShe raced away from Ivywhisker and Whitekit pounding breathlessly into the medicine cat den, staring at the limp body of her father.. Mintleaf was still out with Mistymoon collecting herbs, but she decided she would do what she could; a dangerous trait for her to have, is that she risks her own life for others before her own..
She dashs too the cobwebs pushing more to his wounds , laying tansy in his mouth gently rubbing his throat for him to swallow. .Adding burdock root to his wounds also, too keep out any infection.
A few hours later- She had dozed off in the corner of the den, away from Fangheart..
Deathclaw watched ammused and let the kit do what she was doing, taking note of how she seemed to know her herbs.
ReplyDeleteDeathclaw stands over the sleeping body of the kit and prods her, his eyes, soft. "good work little one."
Blackkits eyes stretch open and when notices Deathclaw, and she suddenly remembers Fangheart left un attended while she obviously selfishly fell asleep on him,
ReplyDelete"How is he?" She asks flicking the tip of her tail to Fangheart..Nervously waiting for the answer.
Deathclaw looked at the mousebrained fool and purred ammused "He is the same as yesterday and the day before. Cloudbrained. But he is recovering from his stupidity. I think you should go see him. Andlet you know, dont try to use herbs agian until your the medicine cat apprentice. I watched, and will let the leader know of your intrests."
ReplyDeleteBlackkit flinched, she had forgotten about her non-stop Herb adding moment, but was glad to hear he was well..
ReplyDelete"I can't become an apprentice till I am 6 moons." She said sadly, though grateful of the time she had still to learn.
Deathclaw nod slowly and walked out of the den, finding a piece of prey to eat. Fangheart gruned and tryed to move, then let out a faint cry of pain. "Wh... where am I.. The medicine den!? He pick up his head and looks around, the deep blue of his eye fallin on Blackkit. "Hello... What.. are you doing.. in here.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit leaped up joyflly, "I'm the one who treated you Mouse brain." She rolled her eyes teasingly.
ReplyDeleteFangheart tried to purr and coughed. He lay his head down and beckoned with his tail for her to come.
ReplyDeleteIvyWhisker looked at FangHeart, then to blackkit and whitekit.. "Are you two alright?" she asked.. looking at there father and back again...
ReplyDelete-Fanghearts' ears twitchd to the sound and he just curled up0 tighter. tail wrapped over his face-
ReplyDeleteIvyWhisker gave a look to the kits then apdded over to FangHeart "Hey.. so.. uhhh you kay?" she asks looking at him. Her white pelt glistening in the dawn light.
ReplyDeleteFanglooked up at the Other worrior and blinked, glancing at the sheen of her fur. He nod slowly and looked at her eyes, His fang like tuft of fur moving , showing his sightless icy blue eye. "Umm.. Yeah. I think Im okay. stupid eagle wouldnt let me kill it for food."
ReplyDeleteIvyWhisker stiffled a laugh.. She dropped the vole she was carrying.. "Hungry?" she asks dipping her head and laying it down infront of her. She smiled warmly at him "Tell me if you need anything else ;D" she licked he head and dashed off.
ReplyDeleteFangheart watched her leave and streached his head, pulling the vole close he tore a piece a flesh off and chewed it slowly, purring as the flavors flowed over his tounge and his hunger was noticed. he tore at the rest of the vole and then licked his lips, then trying to sit up. He grunted and then stoped, laying there. "oh great starclan. I cant even sit up."
ReplyDeleteFangheart sighed and looked at the brightening sky, then down at his broken body. He almost yowled out in agony, but kept his mouth shut. He looked at the bones of the vole and pushed them away with his good paw. His ears twitched as he listened to the place awakening. Fangheart licked his tail and curled it around his legs.
DeleteWhitekit stared in amazement.
ReplyDelete"You fixed Fangheart?" He tilts his head curiously.
"Why? Surprising? ". she retorted.
"No, it's just you never told me you wanted to become a medicine cat.." His eyes completely blank,
"Well things change." She was more than happy with the truth about her becoming a medicine cat, but her brother always annoyed her constantly.
"We should get another warrior, to help Fangheart out and into the lake. If he learns to swim, his wounds would get the strength they need." Blackkit wondered.
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ReplyDeleteFangheart glanced at his legs and huffed, rolling his eyes, impatientce over coming him. "Dang, Now i cant move for atleast a moon. and even then warrior duties will be hard. Not to mention i have two kits i need looking after... Maybe I should ask mistymoon or IvyWhisker to watch them while i recover.." He goes quiet as clan life lulls him into a sleep.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit stood away from the medicine cat, she had no idea why but she didn't want to have anything to do with her father.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit, had a feeling; a feeling which horrified her completely. She was having nightmares, every night. And a feeling during the day that wouldn't stop till dusk, Whitekit was unusually worried about Blackkit.. Never once had she been like this, which concerned him dearly.
(random comment) WOW I feel the love.
DeleteFangheart awoke with a dull pain in his legs. He thought and remebered what had happened and he muttered "mousedung" THe tom tried to sit up and manngaded, his face twisted with pain.
ReplyDeleteclan patrols. Deathclaw, take Hollystar and finchflight for a border patrol. watch out for the eagle. Mistymoon, Take one of the new warriors and have a hunting patrol.
DeleteIvyWhisker ran over to MistyMoon "May I come, I wanna rip it's head off!" she hissed under her breath.. Imagining herself clawing at the eagle and taking it down easily.. She was stronger then most she-cats her age..
ReplyDelete"Ok..." Mistymoon answered. She took a step away from Ivywhisker.
ReplyDelete"I also want.. Wolffang!" Mistymoon called out. The three headed out of camp as soon as Wolffang approached.
IvyWhisker pricked her ears, hearing the Eagle she looked up "Duck!" she yoweld as it swooped down.. The next time it swooped IvyWhisker jumped on her wings, IvyWhisker's weight weighed it down, she clawed at it's head.. It squaked and it fell toward the ground, where MistyMoon and WolfFang helped weigh it down! She bit it's neck and killed it with one swift bite.
ReplyDelete(Umm...thank you? hehehehehe. )
DeleteFangheart groaned and twitsed, glaring at the gorund outside of his nest and the med den. he wriggled and slowly moved outa the nest on his side. he grimmaced and tryed to stand, falling down and looking at the den exit with a determined face. his legs slightly healed now, but not storng enough to hold him up. He clawed out with his good fore paw and drug himself toward the entrance, determined. "I.... WIll.. Get... Out.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit narrowed her eyes, annoyed at her father. She dragged him back up to the nest, and hissed between her teeth.
ReplyDelete"Knock it off Mouse-brain, " Whitekit stared at Blackkit in shock,
"Mouse-brain? That is a first." I turn to face Whitekit and roll my eyes,
"He'll be fine if he stops being such an mouse-brain anyway," she stalks out of the den along with whitekit.
-Fanghearts ears went back in sadness and curled his head between his paws, hiding it. Hurt that his kit seemed to disown him. He culred his tail over the rest of his head and just layed in his nest-
ReplyDeleteIvyWhisker padded into the medicine cat den.. Blood pooring from one of her torn ears and a long scratch on her flank.. She saw FangHeart eyeballing her wounds.. "Eagle, I killed it." she told him. She shook her fur. The medicine cat was worried and told her to spend the night there.. "Looks like i'm stuck with you!" she sighs smiling a tiny bit.
ReplyDeleteFangheart nod slowly, and looks at her eyes excited. "Like dead dead? how you do it? he was atleast the size of a two leg nest!"
ReplyDelete"Jumped on his back, clawed, and bit his neck, I fell on a tree as he plummited from the sky, that's why i'm here in the medicine cat den.." she sighed. She looked back at him.. "Don't worry, you weakend him for me!" she said muzziling his muzzle she curled her tail over her nose and fell asleep.
ReplyDelete-Fangheart blinks and wathced her fall asleep, blinks and wondering what just happened. He purrs and licks the she-cats ears and stares out of the medicine den- ... Oh Blackkit... why do you hate me..
ReplyDeleteIvyWhisker woke up the next morning, she stretched and yawned. She padded out of the den. But before she did she licked FangHeart between the ears. Went to the freshkill pile and back to the medicine den, carrying a vole and mouse.. She set the vole next to FangHeart and ate her Mouse.
ReplyDelete- He looked up and meows lightly thank you and asked her to stay, pulling vole close and eating it. "I must ask you, why did you atack the eagle? It was mousebrained and you could have died." he licked her paw as that was all he could reach. He looked up at her. "I dont want to loose you."
ReplyDeleteShe looked up at him "I did it for you.."she meowed blushing. She got up and licked between his ears purring she layed next to FangHeart.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit could over hear almost every word, of Ivywhisker and Fangheart, her heart pounding when he asked' Why, do you hate me' Knowing obviously, it was I he were talking of. I didn't want to know that is what he thought, though of a reason I did not want to see him- ever. , The feeling scared her and she didn't know quite why, but then it hit her. .. She lost her mother, the first time she opened her eyes and noticed their father, their mother died. Seeing him again worried her, and she then thought that another warriors, or a close friend would die.. And being in that position, she wanted to flee of it.
ReplyDelete-he sniffed the air and mewed out loud, licking ivywhiskers ears before meowing- Blackkit.. I can smell you my lovely. come here please...
ReplyDeleteBlackkit couldn't help but flick her ear in amusement, her scent couldn't have been caught on that quickly! She thought, she entered the den with a simple nod, curling her tail over her paws and tilting her head.
ReplyDelete"Father.." She began,
"I am truly sorry of my behavior recently, it was ..Not tolerated , I understand that now." She finished.
-he nod and nduged ivywhiser, moving her alittle and pulled himself to his kit, liking her between the ears atleast 100 times and then rubbed his furry cheek agianst hers. "If.. this is becasue of losing mom.. I fee the same. I was scared to.
ReplyDeletewhen the eagle about killed me."
DeleteIvyWhisker shook her pelt as she stood up, she padded out of the den.. Sitting down in the warriors den.. She sat, her head on her paws.. just looking at the den wall.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit nodded, thoughtfully.
ReplyDelete"I know.. Just her loss was hard on all of us, she was a good warrior." She spoke faithfully, watching Ivywhisker go turned suspicion .. She honestly loved Ivywhisker also, she would play with her all of the time when needing a play-mate.
IvyWhisker padded out of the den, she'd had enough of plagued dreams. She padded out into the forest.. as she got deeper in she heard a whisper.. she whipped her head around.. and there he was... the dawn of all death.. NightStar.
ReplyDeleteNightStar's cold eyes stared at her.. "Hello... are you going to speak?" he asked her.. IvyWhisker just stared at him.. She had finally gotten the courage, she lept at him hissing and yowling curses.. She jumped onto his back she started to claw him but he flipped over and landed on her.. He clawed painful claws down her back. She yowled in pain, but couldn't wriggle out of his grasp.. she finally stopped trying and fell, wounded, and dying.. Blood pooring from her ears and face, a claw mark was on her belly, blood poored from that the most.. she yowled then fainted.
ReplyDelete-he looked at the sky and nod, feeling it. He nudged blackkit and looked at her-
ReplyDeleteplease dont leave camp
She finally awoke.. She was being carried by NightStar, blood pooring form her wounds.. She blinked, everything was fuzzy.. She saw the camp... it was below.. her.. they were padding into it.. he was gonna be a 'hero'... she looked up terrified.. She was layed down by NightStar "HELP!!" he yowled. "IvyWhisker is hurt!" he meowed.
ReplyDeleteWhitekit's eyes grew wide, his sisters Blackkit might have been the best scent taker, but himself could hear farther away. He could feel the terror, and the faint yowling of Ivywhisker. He pelted out of the camp, chasing after her scent. When he eventually came to Ivywhisker, Nightstar was there too. He hiss inwardly,
ReplyDelete"Stay away from her you coward," He spoke, and lifted Ivywhisker up by the scruff and gently pulling her.. Yet his small teeth, and her strength didn't match and he couldn't find the strength to bring her back to camp in time.
-fanghearts ears twitched and he jumped up, falling back down. He tried agians and glared with cold determination and he slowly pulled him self to the leader. He glared at the leader, then when he saw ivyleaf he slowly pad to her saddly, falling down as he lost all his energy. he licked at her wounds, eyes glimmering with defeat. he shook his head and glared at the coward. "These are your claws! you did this you!!!"
ReplyDeleteyou did this to her*
DeleteNightStar just looked at his claws and licked her blood from them.. "Me? Of course? Who else?" he said slyly.. His face just whiskers from FangHeart's. "Who do you think sent that Eagle? And Eagle wouldn't just attack now would they?" he asked slyly smirking as the expressions on FangHeart's face changed. IvyWhisker was hardly breathing.. NightStar stood up.. "Shall I take the clan, or shall you give it to me?" he asked slyly.
ReplyDeleteWhitekit ignored his fathers words, pouncing on Nightstare and biting him on the exact vital vain, that is held when a warrior kills its prey. ...
ReplyDelete"You , Nightstar deserve the worst So be prepared for it," He said, before biting down.
NightStar flung the kit on the ground.. Scraping his deap claws into his soft stomach and hissing, his face right infront of the kits "I shall kill you.. with your father's watchfull eyes, watching your slow painful death!" he hissed.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit stared at Ivywhisker, almost collapsing at the sight of her. She pelted over, dabbing herbs against her wounds , and creating a poultice. ..
ReplyDeleteFangheart pulled himself over his love and hisses. A blackcat steeped out of the shadows and he glared at the evil cat with his green left eye showing. Deathclaw steped foward and grinned at fangheart. "You cloudbrain. you fight an enemy.. not talk to them." He leaps at the other can and slashes at its sides then shot awaybefore a blow could be hit. "I know who you are."
ReplyDeleteWhitekit gasped, the painful feeling opening the inside of him, he cried out though the small cry lasted a second long, and came to a few deep breathes.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit stared in anger,
"Starclan will make you pay!" She looked to her brother, and to Ivywhisker she had no attendance to cure them both,
NightStar flung WhiteKit away.. Staring at BlackKit he flung the kit off, dragging IvyWhisker away, "Nobody, shall, heal, this cat!" he hissed looking at the kit..
ReplyDeleteNightStar looked at DeathClaw "Me too." he hissed. "DeathClaw, you look young, have you done something to that mangey pelt of yours?" he hissed. Shaking his pelt he sat down, BlueThunder and OakMoon padded out of the shadows.. In-Circling the cats.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit, had a sudden feeling burning up inside of her.
ReplyDelete/Starclan , help us!/ She thought, this had been more real then she expected, Whitekit was going to die, and also Ivywhisker. She had to do something, she looked pleadingly up to the sky,
FrostEyes an unknown (you guys don't know her at least) came down.. "BlackKit, i'm here.. i'll help you..." she meowed into the kits ear.. ruffling her ear fur.. IvyWhisker yelped in pain as NightStar re-opened the gash in her side..
ReplyDeleteDeathclaw didnt even flinch and sauntered to the leader. "I would leave or i will call on starclan you fool." He grasped fagnheart and pulls the cat away, and tosses him toward the kits. He stepps foward, fur rising along his shoulders-
ReplyDeleteBlackkit, yet was the only one who could see this warrior.
ReplyDelete"Their going to kill them, I can help you; I believe I have the power to kill him.. If your willing to fight along side me?" She asks thoughtfully,
-he blinks as he looks at a the staclan cat. "oh.. nevermind."
ReplyDeleteNightStar rolls his eyes... "StarClan!!" he laughs.. "Are you threatining me with STARCLAN?!!?!" he yowled.. He laughed.. He looked up at DeathClaw, he's eyes glowing red now "I could kill you now!!" he hissed.
ReplyDeleteFrostEyes nods.. She jumps onto NightStar.. "Don't torment this cats!!" She hissed.. IvyWhisker was confused, nightstar was pinned? She coughed up blood. "helpp.." she asked BlackKit weakly.. coughing more blood.
ReplyDelete"No you won't!" Ears flattening, Blackkit lept through the air quickly, and landing on her paws onto Nightstar. Clawing his back, she tugged onto his tail, tightly and firmly. Nothing could shake her off, she was giving time to FrostEyes.
ReplyDeleteWhitekit looked around, his eyes growing blurry.
"Fa..Nghear..t. Mama says hello," He cried..
-fangheart carwled to ivywhisker, trying to save her- Mari...gold... and cobwebs... Deathclaw jumped at the act the same time frost eyes did, glaring at the leader. He left the starclan cats side and stood over ivywhisker, protceting her.
ReplyDeleteWhitekit took his last breathe, and Blackkit stared in horror pulling off of Nightstar.. She crawled helplessly over to her brother, her ears flattening she then seeked revenge.
ReplyDelete"Fangheart, You rather protect your friends, then your kin?" She hissed at him, anger flushed beneath her paws, she no longer felt any kindness toward Fangheart, she pulled Whitekit away and pelted to the barrier, along with Whitekit; she felt she had no place no longing to be with Ravenclan, any longer.
IvyWhisker looked at WhiteKit.. with the last living strength she had she crawled to the kit.. falling asleep next to her.. She woke up in StarClan's forest.. "StarClan!!" she yowled.. "Don't take this--" she was going to say when a StarClan cat came to her side.. "It's her time.." she said.. "Take me instead!" she pleeded.. the StarClan she-cat hesitated.. "Because of your courage, you both may stay.." she says.. IvyWhisker woke up gasping.. the kit was okay, she started to lick her head.. NightStar disappeared under there grasp.. "I'll be back!" the voice trailed.. OakMoon and BlueThunder were gone too.
ReplyDelete-fangheart layed there, piece of fur over eye gone, leaving a sightless icy blue eye and a deep seablue eye looking at the two almost dead cats. He cried out and whined, having no clue that white had been hruting. -he pushes toward the kit and licks its head then looks up and around for blackkit.
ReplyDeleteWhitekit awoken.. And Blackkit revengeful, she for then hated Fangheart and wished never to see him again.
ReplyDelete"Whitekit!" She gasped, chasing over and licking, Ivywhisker and Whitekit.
IvyWhisker falls asleep on the spot... she doesn't move for a long time. barely breathing. her whiskers barely twitch as breath flows from her lungs, blood staining her fur.. her claws still sheathed, fighting for life.. Death only pricking it claws into her.
ReplyDeleteFangheart looked at blackkit and eyes saddened. "I didnt know... Im a bad father... I should have died with that eagle." fangheart curls beside ivy, his tial over hers. He sniffed as a his eyes clouded in pain.
ReplyDeleteIvyWhisker awokened.. She looked at FangHeart... "I'm sorry..." she said.. "It's all my fault.. if I hadn't.." she turned and cringed the pain in her heart.. "We can't do this.. i've already caused you enough pain..." she sighed.. She got up and walked out of camp leaving the territory.. she kept on walking until she found a sheltered den.
ReplyDeleteNO!! He crys out and ead quietly, he just lied there and w to kill him. deathclaw slashed at fangheart, claws a whisker from his throught. "you selfish little mousebrianed, cloudbrianed, worthless piece of queens dirt!" he grasped the cat and drug him into the camp, laying him in the medicine den. Deathclaw went out and chased down Ivywhisker, tackling her and pinning her. "You my furry and fluffy friend, are a a fl
ReplyDeleteBlackkit glared at their father painfully, filled with hurt.
ReplyDelete"..Stay away from us." She walked away from whitekit, who was strangely annoyed. he looked too Fangheart.
"Don't worry, she's just hurt she'll get over it." He was unsure, but said it anyway. Blackkit wandered out of camp, she was going to track down Nightstar and then eventually kill him, if it was the last thing she did.
Fangheart just hid his head in his tail and didnt wake up, slowly falling into starclan, not wanting the pains anymore. His mate came and met him, shaking her head she told him no, not his time and that he was being unwise, becuase blackkit needed him more then ever. she then tyouched her nose to his, and he felt better and he woke up. He slowly and looked at his legs. He about leaped in the air happy and then though back- NO!!! BLACKKIT!! -he dashed from the clan, chasing down her-
ReplyDeleteBlackkit heard the yowl of her name and turned her head slightly,
ReplyDelete"Fangheart?" She asks unsure..
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IvyWhisker looked at DeathClaw half terrified to death.. "What the?!" she yowled. she wriggled from his grasp and started, dashing into the forest she ran into FangHeart.. "What the what?!" she yowled.. he was running... Her eyes filled with joy. She lept onto him and started to lick him between the ears happily.. the stinging of her wounds now as if they were just painful memories.
ReplyDeleteIvyWhisker dashed onward, chasing BlackKit.. she lept on the kit who was oblivous.. "Gotchya!!" she yowled as she tumbled with the kit. getting serious she stares at the kit.. "If you don't want me with your father, or to be your mother it's fine by me.." she said licking the kit in between the ears.
ReplyDeleteHer head whipped back in place, while she stood before Nightstar; 'What have I done?' She thought,
ReplyDelete"You, again.." He hisses cuffing my ear roughly, his claws tearing through my ear.
"What can I do for you, my deary?" He asks lieingly, and evily.
"Oh nothing, but ..I could do way more for you, then you could ever do of I." I hiss , but didn't try to make any attempt to attack.
"I will come with you, if you do not harm Ravenclan, even if they have done you wrong," She tilts her head in question,
Fanghearts heart leapt with joy as he saw ivywhisker, then he kept running, searching out his kit, determined not to let anymore to get between them. "BlackKit! Where are you, i didnt know! Blackkit!"
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ReplyDelete(Ok,umm...i haven't been able to get on in awhile so i'm a little confused.Who's Nightstar,Frosteyes,Oakmoon and Bluethunder?Also,what just happened?)
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ReplyDelete(StormWG, DO NOT RP WITH MY CATS, I just HATE powerplaying!! NightStar is my cat, thank you..) NightStar is the formal leader of NightClan, he killed the leader, kits, and others. He didn't hurt his followers, nobody knows him better then me, because I made him, and i rp with him. OakMoon is the deputy of NightClan, he's still known to be a good warrior, but he follows and believes in NightStar's ways. BlueThunder is NightStar's mate, she's dead, lives in the Dark Forest ectera. FrostEyes is not a random StarClan cat, she's my most favored cat, She was a formal StreamClan warrior, who is respected by all of the clan, and known for her beautiful frosty eyes.... (I'll put picutres of them on my blog animaljamsuperepicness.weebly.com so you know what they look like ;D) and also, StormWG was powerplaying and made BlackKit join NightStar (it's fine, just you couldv'e asked first!)
ReplyDelete(Oh, sorry!!!!!! I didn't realize, :D. I wont do it again, I'll delete the post and if you can, if you want maybe you could re-write it!!!..Just about Frosteyes, you just said "You dont know her yet, shes just a random Starclan cat" So I just assumed.. :DD. So sorry...:D. SO ECHO..IGNORE MY POST. :DDD CGB IS THE REAL STORY-INTRODUCTION. )))
ReplyDeleteYOU DIDNT SAY RANDOM STARCLAN CAT. YOU SAID (You dont know her at least) Sorry.. e_e Mis understanding </3 :D
ReplyDelete(it's totally okay, mistakes happen!! BlackKit can join NightStar 2!)
ReplyDeleteIvywhisker, you are allowed to control my Fangheart while im grounded, basically because he your lover. too all in the clan, I am grounded so no worrys. i will post on mondays and wendsdays.
Delete(She's not evil, shes innocent..Selfless, and she knows she is doing the right thing to save Ravenclan! And thanks, haha. ;3)
ReplyDelete(lawl!! Okay, thanks Micah Bean!) IvyWhiskers pads out of the warrior's den, she smiles warmly at FangHeart then hears her name called for a patrol.. (When WhiteKit gonna be apprenticed?) NightStar looked at BlackKit.. "From this moment on you shall be known as the Dark Shadow, DarkShadow for short" he tells the kit. He pads into the Forest "Kit's, show him what we are like" says NightStar to DeadKit and TornKit, they pounce on him, tearing his flesh away, then padding off (not all of it!!)
ReplyDelete(im going to retrieve my daughter yall, just yah wait.)
ReplyDeleteFangheart dips his head to his lover and looks around, his tuft of fur having grown back and absuring his left eye. he cast his deep blue gaze on the other warriors and nod to them, giving out patrol orders. "Ivywhisker, hunt with finchflight and the new cat (am learing names otay?) and keep an eye out for Blackkit... and take your apprentice with you." fangheart nod as he sent off the patrols and walked over to the side of the creek, staring into its waters. he shook his fur and licked it: casting his loving fatherly gaze at whitekit. Fangheart got up and when to the kit and licked the kits fur roughly, purring in greeting. "you will be apprenticed in no time Whitekit. and your just as strong as me, yet still have the wits of your mther." fang trailed off in speach then shook his head as white kit looked at him concerned. Im okay. -fang suantered to a tree and jumped and scrammbled up it, laying down in a branch. After a nap, his fluffy tail hanging from the branches, he jumped out and landed lightly at the side of the creek. he slased out with his claws and hooked a fish from the water, then jumped at it, nipping its skul in a killing bite. he drug the fish to the fresh kill pile and sat in the shade of a tree. Deathclaw watched ammused and then left camp, looking in on the borders.
ReplyDelete(Haha! Blackkit is a girl,) Blackkit shrugged, though inside she was filled in fear; she wanted to go home..But she knew what she had to do,
ReplyDelete"Is that the best they can do?" She hisses.
"Useless. You let them do as they pleased, no warrior will tolerate it.. How do you know, it will work as well as you did now? On another warrior." She snaps, shuddering at the name 'Darkshadow' for her new introduction. She paces around, Tornkit and Deadkit.
"Their nothing. " She looks to Nightstar,
"But I am." Blackkit needed to take out her anger on someone, and the looks of the kits..Were as though they were prepared to fight to the death.
Whitekit looked to Fangheart,
ReplyDelete"Fangheart, we will find Blackkit. She isn't one to run, unless she has a plan. Have faith," He said brightly. Hoping he was as right as he sounded, if he were to become deputy after his father, he would need to have faith in everything, and every cat in his clan; especially his only sibling.
Fangheart purred and looked at the bugs flitting through the woods. he sighed and lowered his eye towards the forest and ears dropped agianst his head, and he prayed to starclan "Oh starclan, protect my kit... I love her to much to let her die. I will find her. May you light my path as I search."
ReplyDeleteFrostEyes heard FangHeart's prayer.. "She is in the place of no stars" she responded to him. (she's like his and his family's gurdian..) NightStar looked at the kit.. He looked at his kits. "DeadKit, why don't you show her the territory?" he hisses at his son, DeadKit looks up smirking. "Be my pleasure." he said, taking after his father. "TornKit go with them" he hissed at his daughter, he hated his daughter. IvyWhisker padded out on patrol, she was hunting, she scented the air, BLACKKIT!! She smelled her. She ran straight back to the clan.. and told FangHeart who was shocked.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit stayed behind,
ReplyDelete"I'll be there in a moment." She looked to Nightstar strangely.
"Why didn't you do anything to me when I insulted your kits?" Blackkit blinked.
"I mean I know I'm not an expert and all but really, why?" For a moment in two seconds she felt a pang of sympathy for the kits; and Nightstar.
"You don't have to live like this, you could change; your kits to.."
Blackkit could hear Deadkit and Tornkit's distant protests, and pelted off not waiting for a response.
NightStar glared at the she-cat. "Don't you EVER!! EVER!! talk to me like that, i'll personally kill you then feed you to my kits the next time you even THINK about changing back to the clan." he hissed at her. DeadKit was bold, his sister TornKit was terrorized about this place.. NightStar bounded up to the Highrock. "Me, being the leader of the DarkForest, call upon my killed ancestors to look down at this puny kit as I apprentice him in his own turn." he looked at the kit. "DeadKit, do you promise to kill any cat who gets in your way, except your family?" he asks him. DeadKit says I do. "Then by the power of my own, I give you your name, DeadSoot" he told the kit, he clawed DeadSoot's face and then padded off, DeadSoot had blood pooring from the scratch, he was ready!
ReplyDeleteBlackkit stared, she didn't flinch when she got yelled at by Nightstar.
ReplyDelete"You do not know what it is like, living in fear; in the dark. And no, you wouldn't touch a hair on me. Or else, I would be dead by now, now wouldn't I? I obviously have some part in your top -secret master plan." She hisses,
"Or do you want me to gloat about your previous victory's, I. Blackkit, kit of Ravenclan. Call upon my warrior ancestors..To look down on Tornkit, she does not deserve to live in the dark- I call on you, her new name~ to become ..Brightkit, kit of the Darkforest." She snaps,
"You, yourself shouldn't treat your own kin like that. Or you will have no one, not me, not Oakmoon, or Bluethunder. Or your kits, you've taught them into complete monsters. Tornk-Brightkit, still has a heart that you havent ripped into little pieces. Be glad you haven't, she shifts over to Tornkit, pulling her away from Nightstar and Deadkit.
"Run!" She whispers, to the small kit.
TornKit looks up at her.. She didn't Flinch, she ran as fast as she could.. NightStar turned on BlackKit, he hissed and lunged at her, swiping a claw along her face he turned around, clawing her with all his claws as they swept past her. He then jumped onto her, grabbing her throaght in his jaws. He let go. "Next time, I will kill you!" he hissed at her, his eyes red slits, and his black fur ruffled. DeadKit was hissing at her. "I'll treate my kin as I want, and i'll treat my family as I want, because you ARE my kin!" he hisses at her through bared teeth. DeadSoot stood there watching as she was clawed. He shrugged. "Do with her what you want." he says.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit felt a burst of energy, she pushed herself from below his grip.
ReplyDelete"You may be the father, of your kits but the way you've taught them to be is not tolerated. When they get sick, they don't have a cat to heal them they have to live with it until it takes over them or eventually just leaves them." She tore her eyes off of Nightstar and to Deadsoot, unsure filled her.
"Deadsoot, do you love your sister? Are you loyal to her? You were littermates. Born together, are you honestly ready to give up that bond between brother and sister?" Blackkit asks, and then pelted off for Brightkit in the direction of Hiddenclan.
Fangheart crawled out from the warriors den, ywaning and blinking away the sleep. he had dreamt of a forest where no sun shone and the shadows were filled with condemed cats. he shivered at the dream and remembered what is deasesed my had whispered. he stalked out to the creak and slipt in quietly, lwting the water flow around his fur and drag his thoughts out into one strand of thought. hee kicked off and swam the the deeper part and hovered there in the water, thinking.
ReplyDeleteMistymoon woke up. She stretched and then sat down. The sun was just coming up so she decided to go hunting. She walked to Hollystar's den. She knocked and waited for a reply.
ReplyDeleteBrightKit dashed under a bush, she had reached the real world. Where there were alive cats, she was alive... she noticed. She crawled from out behind a bush, she padded cautisouly, there were a couple of cats, "Whose there?!" said IvyWhisker bristling. "BrightKit" she squeaked. IvyWhisker tilted her head.. "Come out." she says softly. BrightKit pads out.. "torn--BrightKit?" she asks. BrightKit nods. "I ran away, BlackKit told me to" she said hesistantely... ivywhisker gasped.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit pelted off for Brightkit, nearly tripping over the broken branch's some what invisible, and then she thought..
ReplyDelete'I can't go, I would risk Hiddenclan.' She turns her small head in the direction of 'THE DARK FOREST' And pelts back over, standing directly in front of Deadsoot; Nightstar outside of him.
"Your not welcome here, if you ever come here again we will kill you!" hissed NightStar. "You have broken OUR code, and we will now kill your clan-mates, not you, yet" he says to BlackKit. "GO!" he hissed nipping at her tail. IvyWhisker pads up to BrightKit.. "Hey there" she says softly.. "You can come out.." she says to her. BrightKit pads out softly.. "Come on, i'll take you to camp where the queens can take care of you alright?" she says to BrightKit. BrightKit nods. She pads behind IvyWhisker. They reach camp and IvyWhisker leads her into the nursery saying "You can go ahead and take care of her for me?" she asks, and pads off. BrightKit pads in, seeing whitekit she pads up to her.. "Hi" she says shakily.
ReplyDeleteShadowfoot looks in the derection of Brightkit and Whitekit.She smiles softly,and resumes licking her very swollen sides.It won't be long till my kits are born...i hope they'll be safe in the clan.She thought.Knowing all to well that since she was blind,she could never fully protect them.She paused and moved into a more comfortable position,one ear turned tawards the kits.
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ReplyDeleteWhitekit blinked at the new kit,
ReplyDelete"Hey." She shrugs,
"When you ran away, did you see my sister? Blackkit?" He asks hesitantly.
Blackkit stares back at Nightstar;
"Okay, but what was that? A code? When I first joined you never mentioned anything about a code; isn't that the first rule?" I snap, and pelt off in the direction of Ravenclan- I push through the barrier excitedly to be back home..Yet determined to gather the entire clan and leave somewhere safer- She saw Ivywhisker, Whitekit, Fangheart Brightkit- Brightkit? She thought happily that she made it here.
"I'm home!" She squeaked aloud.
BrightKit wipped her head around... "DarkShadow!!!" she mews padding up to her friend and giving her licks. (that's BlackKit's name, that NightStar gave her, but not anymore, she didn't know her real name) "I wished you would come back!!" she said purring loudly to her friend. She sat down looking at her "Did.. he hurt you?" she asked her. BlackKit shook her head.. "Come here!!" she said. as the two kits padded off they stopped by a stump.. "You have to promise me you won't tell anybody who my family is!" said BrightKit.
ReplyDeleteBlackkit blinked, her ear twitched curiously.
ReplyDelete"I wont, I promise." She purred quietly, Whitekit padding up happily to the two kits.
"Hey Blackkit!"
"Did you ever doubt me?" I ask,
"..Nope!" Whitekit lied, and whispered gently to Blackit;
"I think I like Brightkit.."
Blackkit laughed,
"Good, she deserves someone like you."
BrightKit was padding off toward the nursery by then.. "Hey WhiteKit, BlackKit!" called IvyWhisker, the two padded toward her "Why don't ya go play with BrightKit?" she asks quitely.
ReplyDelete"I will," Blackkit says,
ReplyDelete"I cant, I have to go beg Hollystar to make me an apprentice. Bye!" He padds off, while Blackkit pads up to Brightkit.
"Hey BlackKit!!" She says as BlackKit pads up. She sat down. "What's up?" she asks.
ReplyDelete"Oh nothing. What about you?" She asks laying a vole beside her friend, gently.
ReplyDeleteBrightKit was curled against IvyWhisker's stomach, she was hungry, she looked up.. she prodded IvyWhisker's stomach.. "May I go get a mouse?" she asked. IvyWhisker grunted as she tried to get up.. She started to lick her sides, swollen, before kitting.. "Yes" she said between licks.. BrightKit padded off and when she came back IvyWhisker was sleeping again.. she padded up to BlackKit and whiteKit "Hungry?" she asked sitting it down and taking a bite.
ReplyDeleteHollystar paded out of her den,and looked around the clearing.She finaly turned tawards Mistymoon."What can i do for you Mistymoon?"She asked.
ReplyDeleteShadowfoot yawned as she woke up from her long nap.She stretched and began to stand up to go into the clearing when pain started from her swollen sides.She hissed,and lay back down.Fear and worry shined in her blind gaze."Ivywhisker!"She mewed her voice hinting at her panic.
Blackkit nodded quickly,
ReplyDelete"More than you probably!" She teased, she dipped her head toward the vole she picked out, and froze at least a second before actually biting it.
"Did you hear that?" She paused, blinking. And eventually spotted Shadowfoot.
Pelting over, and stared at Shadowfoot in concern.
"What is going on?"
"The kit's!" Blackkit suddenly remembered, how was she going to deliver the kits on her own? She thought frantically.
Shadowfoot gave a small nod and gasped as another contraction hit.She tried to say something to Blackkit but only managed to hiss throught clenched teeth as she surpressed a yowl of pain.The contractions were getting closer and closer togeather.
ReplyDeleteHollystar looked curiously tawards the nursery,certain she'd heard a hiss,she watched as Blackkit paded into the nursery.She'll come out for help if somethings wrong.She reasoned,her tail tip twitching.
Blackkit narrowed her eyes,
ReplyDelete"This is going to hurt, but I need you to do as I say." Blackkit pressed her little paws to Shadowfoot's stomach,
"Push!" She squeaked, while pushing firmly onto Shadowfoot's belly. Yet she could feel the presence of Hollystar in the den also,
Shadowfoot pushed,as the contraction were the closest togeather.She let out a hiss and dug her claws in the soft earth beside her nest.The first kit slid out into her nest and she stoped,panting with the effort it had taken.She hissed again as the contraction continued on.
ReplyDeleteHollystar frowned and paded tawards the nursery.She stoped in her tracks as she saw Blackkit and a kitting Shadowfoot.
(The first kit is a grey tabby tom.)
Blackkit quickly turned to Hollystar,
ReplyDelete"Hollystar! Go to the nursery and collect Borageleaves, she is going to need them for when the kits are born" Blackkit says, gently guiding the kit to Shadowfoots belly.
She firmly pushed Shadowfoots belly again, asking her to push once more.
(Hollystar, just forget about me coming up to you.)
ReplyDeleteMistymoon squirmed around in her nest and she finally fell asleep.
*Mistymoon's Dream*
She walked around in a shadowy forest. 'This must be the Dark Forest.' she decided in her mind. She slowly crept through some trees. She could see a little light. "Starclan is that way.." she whispered. She headed towards the blinding light. There were dark cats in the forest, warriors who were to evil and ambitious. She finally reached the border between Starclan and the Dark Forest. She stepped over the border and breathed in deeply the fresh air. Her mother was waiting for her. Mossclaw sat up when she saw her daughter. "Mother!" Mistymoon cheered. She hugged her mom. "It's been a while since I have seen you." her mother meowed.
"Y-yes. But, I know you didn't just call me here to chat mom. What is it?" Mistymoon asked with a concerned face.
"About that... You see.. You know your father. You know how he didn't want to have you?" she asked.
"Yes.." Mistymoon sighed.
"Well.. He has another daughter, named Sun. She is a spoiled brat at that, but that is not what I wanted to tell you. I wanted to say this.." she concluded.
"Y-yes?" Mistymoon urged.
"Your life ahead of you is going to be very tough. You must be strong and determined. You will have to take on a big responsibility." her mother warned her.
"What?" Mistymoon asked.
"I cannot tell. I'm sorry." Mossclaw replied.
"Ok.. I understand. Starclan has their reasons.." Mistymoon replied sighing.
"Goodbye mother. It was nice talking."
"Yes it was."
Mossclaw faded and Mistymoon woke up.
Hollystar noded and quickly bounded out of the den,returning moments later with some herbs and wet moss.She laid both beside Blackkit and smiled softly at her neice as she watched her work on the kitting queen.While she'd been gone,the second kit, a she-cat had been born."Almost there Shadowfoot,your doing great."She incouraged the queen.
ReplyDeleteShadowfoot didn't hear Hollystar as she panted, the contractions already growing closer togeather for the third time.Please starclan let this be over soon!She thought,already exausted from kitting her first two kits.
Blackkit smiled, guiding the kits to her belly. She pawed Shadowfoot a pawful of borage leaves.
ReplyDelete"Thank's Hollystar" Blackkit licked Hollystars ear, and padded out of the nursery.
"When will me and Whitekit become apprentices? Brightkit too." She added friendly, padding beside Hollystar.
IvyWhisker had dashed over to the nursery and was with BlackKit. She was trying to calm down ShadowFoot. She started to masauge her shoulders.. "Your doing good!" she said to her coolly. She looked at BlackKit.
ReplyDeleteBrightKit nodded. She started to eat the mouse with WhiteKit.. "I wonder what's wrong with BlackKit" she mewed with a mouthfull of mouse. (She has a little crush on Whitekit)
Shadowfoot manged to nod and clenched her teeth as the last kit a small grey tabby she-cat was born.She hardly noticed as the last kit was nudged to her side.Scenting the borage,she ate it up before laying her head down and closing her eyes.She visibly relaxed as the pain disapeared and her kits suckled.She purred softly wraping her tail around them.After a few moments she looked up tawards Ivywisker."Ivywhisker..What do they look like?"She asked her eyes shining in fustration at her blindness.She bent down to lick her multicoulored tabby daughter as the kit mewed out.
ReplyDeleteHollystar smiled down at Blackkit."Soon.I'll talk with both Fangheart and Ivywhisker,if they agree,you'll be made apprentices at noon-high tommorow.Blackkit you want to train as a medecine cat,right?"She asked,the kit as they left the nursery.I'll come back to congradulate Shadowsplash later.She thought.
"Well there is a she-kit.. she's a grey tabby.. and.. there is a gray tabby tom... and the last one is.. (I don't know what the last one looks like)" mews IvyWhisker comforting. She nudges the kits to there mother..
ReplyDeleteMistykit happily skipped along side of Hollystar,
ReplyDelete"Of course! Becoming a medicine cat is all I've ever wanted." She smiled,
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Whitekit looked to Brightkit,
"Trust me, I've learn't not to be surprised of anything Mistykit does." He laughed, taking a bite of the vole and passing it over to Brightkit.
(Do you mean BlackKit, wrong clan Storm...) BrightKit smiles at WhiteKit.. "So.. when we become apprentices wanna go hunting together?" she askes lamely... (that's so dupid!! asking if she can go hunting while she's a kit XD!) BrightKit licks her fur uncomfortably.. she had a crush on this young tom..
ReplyDeleteWhitekit laughed,
ReplyDelete"That is probably the first thing we'll learn!" He added smiling.
`Hollystar paded over to Blackpaw,"Are you ready to leave for the star cave?"She asked the newly apprenticed black she-cat.
ReplyDeleteShadowfoot blinked open her eyes as she felt her kits stirring from their nap in her nest."Shadowfoot can we go play outside?"She heard Firekit squeak a moment later.Shadowfoot yawned and stretched into a sitting potion.Considering her daughter's question.After a few moments she sighed,knowing she couldn't keep them confined to the nursery forever.She located Firekit throught scent and licked the top of her head lovingly."Alright but stay close to the nursery."She mewed.
Firekit beamed up at her mother and looked over at her littermates.Ever since they had opened their eyes that morning they'd wanted to explore outside the nursery."Come on let's go!"She squealed excitedly and ran clumsily out into the clearing."Stay togeather!"She heard her mother say from inside the nursery,as she stoped to look around the clearing.
Lilykit looked around timidly after fallowing her sister out,"Everything and everyone is so big!"She gasped quietly.
Stormkit looked around excitedly as he burst into the camp clearing to busy trying to look everywhere all at once to say any thing. "We should explore the camp!"He finaly sugested a few moments later.Firekit emidiatly noded, while Lilykit noded wint a hint of uncertainity.
Blackpaw nodded to Hollystar, Whitepaw basically bouncing on his paws leaped up beside them, waiting for Brightpaw to carry along.
ReplyDelete"Where are you going?" Whitepaw asks his mentor, protested to come along.
"Were on our way to the star cave." Blackpaw sounded very serious at the moment, and Whitepaw stood his ground knowing what the answer would be.
"Okay, be safe." Whitepaw added, padding back over to the waiting Brightpaw.
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(BrightKit is too young to be a apprentice!!) BrightPaw didn't look at WhitePaw, nor wait, she just kept padding, she was upset. she didn't know why, something seemed wrong, was it just that she was too young to be apprenticed? She shook her pelt and kept padding on.
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ReplyDeleteMintleaf looked at the herbs she collected. Enough, maybe? She thought to herself.
ReplyDeleteShe needed an apprentice.
Mintleaf looked at the herbs again. She shook her head and decided that it wasn't enough. What if they had a battle?
I need more marigold. She thought.
And more watermint, catmint, tansy and yarrow.
I need more of everything.
Mintleaf sighed and stared blankly at the cats outside her den, having fun.
Should she do that too?
Leafwhisper looked at her swelling belly. Soon kits. But the nursery is so crowded!
I hope my kits come out sfter most of them are apprentices! Leafwhisper though to herself.
She looked at Shadowfoot and sighed.
-fangheart pad into camp, left eye alight with deep sea blue satisfaction and looked back, deathclaw close behind him. fangheart looked around and rann off, tackling Ivywhisker and purring, licking her ears- Im back!
ReplyDeleteSorry for my abbsence ya. I lost my password and google wqouldnt let me make a new one. and i have been grounded but im back now, and fluffier then ever!
DeleteIvyWhisker muzzled her mate then stood up, shaking her pelt.. she looked at him "I'm glad your safe!" she meowed, licking his muzzle. "Our kits are apprentices, and i kinda adopted one.. BrightKit!" she called. BrightKit dashed up to her "Whose this?" she asked. "Your father FangHeart!" she meowed. BrightKit nodded "Okay" she meowed, she padded off. "Don't worry, she's just.. doesn't know you, she's from the dark forest" she mews apologetically. She licks his muzzle and pads with him "Let's get a mouse or two" she mews, padding toward the fresh kill pile, once she's there she sits down and starts to eat one, sharing it with FangHeart.
ReplyDeleteMistymoon padded towards the nursery.
ReplyDeleteShe saw the new kits and decided to chat.
"Hi! What are your names?" she asked the new kits.
Firekit smiled happily and beamed up at Mistymoon."I'm Firekit!This is Stormkit and she's Lilykit."She mewed excitedly as she pointed to each of her littermates in turn.
ReplyDelete"Are you a warrior?"Stormkit asked hopefully.
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ReplyDeleteHollystar paded over to where Whitepaw was talking with Brightkit.She smiled and noded in greeting to the both of them, before turning to Whitepaw."I hope your ready for some battle training."She mewed.
ReplyDeleteWhitepaw's eyes grew wide,
ReplyDelete"I'll see you later Brightkit!" She turned tail following Hollystar quickly, and out of the barrier.
"You wish.." murmured BrightKit sadly, turning for the nursery.
ReplyDelete"Yes I am Firekit! My name is Mistymoon." she replied to the young tom.
ReplyDeleteMistymoon was amused by the young kit's enthusiasticness. (If that's even a word, Google says not, I beg to differ Google.)
Hopepaw pounced up to her mentor, Mistymoon, hopefully. She had worked on the new battle moves that Mistymoon had taught her with the other apprentices, which were having fun, but she knew they were still suspicious of her "magic.", and she was hungry.
ReplyDelete"Mistymoon, can I eat now?" she pestered and made a pouty face.
"Yes, but bring back some for the queens and kits." Mistymoon instructed.
"Yes Ma'am!" Hopepaw joked.
Hopepaw ran over to the fresh kill pile and grabbed three pieces, as much as she could fit into her mouth, one for her and two for the three queens, she figured they would share, sharing the same den and all. She dropped the fresh kill at the nursery infront of the three queens.
Whitepaw looked back on Brightkit, with a look of concern; and then back to his mentor.
ReplyDelete"What is t like being leader?" He asked while they walked to the training hollow.
Blackpaw shuffled cobwebs, alder bark, horsetail, and juniper berries into the poultice she was creating.
BrightKit padded into the medicine cat den looking at BlackPaw "BlackPaw, I need help" she murmurs. "I really like WhitePaw, but don't know if he likes me, and i'm just a kit." she murmurs. "I don't know, how to feel, how to act, i'm not even really part of this clan it feels. It feels like i'm a dirty rouge!! AND I SHOULD BE!" she mews. "I'm NightStar's only daughter, why did you bring me back?!" she says getting frustrated. "why....." she trails off. sitting down and looking at her paws.
ReplyDeleteBlackpaw moved over to Brightkit,
ReplyDelete"I brought you here because you don't belong with Nightstar,"
"You never did." Blackpaw added,
"You're sibling,I know he has some good still left inside of him."
Hopepaw walked over to the apprentice's den and layed down- slowly chewing her fresh kill.
ReplyDeleteShe finished and rested her head on her paws.